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雅思作文得高分的语句表达技巧

作者:kerry 来源:北京诺思整理 2014-10-13
热门关键字:雅思作文   语句技巧多样化  
导读:对于出国留学的学生大多数的雅思成绩都不是很好,特别的雅思作文的书写是国内学生的一大弱点,很多学生雅思作文使用的语句都比较死板,不懂的使用多样化技巧。作文除了内容丰富和组织要相紧密外,更重要的是词汇的运用和句子的处理。
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对于出国留学的学生雅思是必考科目,但是纵观大家的雅思考试内容,雅思作文的书写是国内学生的一大弱点,很多学生雅思作文使用的语句都比较死板,不懂的使用语句技巧多样化。作文除了内容丰富和组织要相紧密外,更重要的是词汇的运用和句子的处理。

雅思作文语句不能一味长、复杂或者一味短、简单,在适当的时候要使用一些复合句,将语句多样化点。句子可长可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简单句,文章必定很单调乏味。如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句,读起来也很费力。最好的方法是以简单句为基础,配合适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短,通常要加些附属成分,如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语,以及节缩成分。总之,作者可根据情况,使句子多样化,使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样,但是句式不同,内容重点也有些差别:

(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2)

(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+简单句)

(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列分句(1)-(2) )

(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语短语)

(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副词从句+主句)

(1)和(5)的句式最常见;如果加上其他三种互相交替,句子不是更多样化吗?在作文中要学会使用各种不同的说法使语言形象生动。再看看以下两个句子如何多样化运用呢?

(6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.

(7) He felt very uneasy.

(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.

(b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.

(c) The young pilot‘’‘’‘’‘’s first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.

(d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.

(e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.

(f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

(g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

(h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.

(i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.

(j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas trainging, he felt very uneasy.

(k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.

(l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.

雅思作文是考评一个学生的综合能力,学生不光要背记很多的单词,还要能巧妙的运用到每段语句中,要使雅思作文的语句技巧多样化,希望小编的一些总结建议对你的升学有所帮助,也祝同学们都能申请到满意的学校。

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